A. Now a days, the boots are not black, nor leather, they are tan and
swede.
Yeah. That's some great critic there. God damn nailed it right ont he head. Apperently next time if I want to write a poem, I'd have to research military fashion. Great.
B. It almost seems like you think that soilders and marines are
murders, how is that fair? They do not kill children, stop listening to the
media.
They don't kill children. Ok, so the kids are killing themselves. That's dandy. And hells yeah, they're murderer because they are soldiers. They train to kill. That's how you fight wars. You kill.
C. The poem is well written and it sounds good...I just think it is
wrong.
Ande
Thanx, Ande, you really opened my eyes. Now I realize that writing contereversial poetry is bad. How dare I imply that the men and women dieing out there are evil? How dare I imply that we are not fighting for freedom but instead of for oil? I should be ashamed of myself. Yeah right.
I finally realize that people are moved only by slogans. I'm not saying that I'm any different. I'll follow the call to end conformity, falling myself into that trap. But still, by Luci! Why won't people think? Yeah it's offensive, but so are a lot of things in this world. You know what I find offensive? Religion. So if I see anyone even talking about it, I'm sueing their asses for inconsideration for atheists. Yeah... that's exactly what I'm going to do, right after I end world hunger and clone unicorns. People should look around more often.
swede.
Yeah. That's some great critic there. God damn nailed it right ont he head. Apperently next time if I want to write a poem, I'd have to research military fashion. Great.
B. It almost seems like you think that soilders and marines are
murders, how is that fair? They do not kill children, stop listening to the
media.
They don't kill children. Ok, so the kids are killing themselves. That's dandy. And hells yeah, they're murderer because they are soldiers. They train to kill. That's how you fight wars. You kill.
C. The poem is well written and it sounds good...I just think it is
wrong.
Ande
Thanx, Ande, you really opened my eyes. Now I realize that writing contereversial poetry is bad. How dare I imply that the men and women dieing out there are evil? How dare I imply that we are not fighting for freedom but instead of for oil? I should be ashamed of myself. Yeah right.
I finally realize that people are moved only by slogans. I'm not saying that I'm any different. I'll follow the call to end conformity, falling myself into that trap. But still, by Luci! Why won't people think? Yeah it's offensive, but so are a lot of things in this world. You know what I find offensive? Religion. So if I see anyone even talking about it, I'm sueing their asses for inconsideration for atheists. Yeah... that's exactly what I'm going to do, right after I end world hunger and clone unicorns. People should look around more often.